Luyện tập: Smartphones
06/11/2024 2024-11-06 16:09Luyện tập: Smartphones
Topic statementIt is clear that large numbers of people spend a considerableđáng kể proportiontỷ lệ of their leisure time looking at their smartphones or similar gadgetsthiết bị. OpinionIn my view there are two major reasons for this.
Topic statementFirstly, so much of our lives is now managed through these devices and we are expected to be in touchgiữ liên lạc at all times. Supporting statementIt is no longer acceptablecó thể chấp nhận được to say that we are on holiday and cut offngắt, cắt (điện, kết nối, …) from communication with the outside world. Supporting statementA related but separate point is that it is difficult to conducttiến hành our social lives without a mobile device. Supporting statementPeople travel much more and their friends often live far away. Supporting statementTherefore, they actually need to conduct relationships online rather than face to face and for this reason frequent use of a mobile device is considered essential.
Topic statementThere are some worrying aspects to this growth in the use of mobile devices, especially at times when people are supposed to be relaxing. ResultFirstly, it is widely believed that phone use can become addictivegây nghiện and lead to an unhealthy dependencesự phụ thuộc. Supporting statementPeople can become anxiouslo lắng if they do not check their devices at all times of the day and night and this can cause insomniachứng mất ngủ and other kinds of mental health problems.
Topic statementOn the other hand, such devices can provide great sources of information and entertainment during our free time. ExampleIt is, for example, valuable to have a mobile device when travelling in a new area, to look up routestuyến đường or to find interesting places to visit. Supporting statementThey also greatly facilitatetạo điều kiện cho activities such as making arrangements to meet up with friends.
OpinionOn balance, I feel that rather than spoiling our health or reducing enjoyment of our free time these devices actually enhance our lives.
It is clear that large numbers of people spend a đáng kể tỷ lệ of their leisure time looking at their smartphones or similar thiết bị. In my view there are two major reasons for this.
Firstly, so much of our lives is now managed through these devices and we are expected giữ liên lạc at all times. It is no longer có thể chấp nhận được to say that we are on holiday and ngắt, cắt (điện, kết nối, …) from communication with the outside world. A related but separate point is that it is difficult to tiến hành our social lives without a mobile device. People travel much more and their friends often live far away. Therefore, they actually need to conduct relationships online rather than face to face and for this reason frequent use of a mobile device is considered essential.
There are some worrying aspects to this growth in the use of mobile devices, especially at times when people are supposed to be relaxing. Firstly, it is widely believed that phone use can become gây nghiện and lead to an unhealthy sự phụ thuộc. People can become lo lắng if they do not check their devices at all times of the day and night and this can cause chứng mất ngủ and other kinds of mental health problems.
On the other hand, such devices can provide great sources of information and entertainment during our free time. It is, for example, valuable to have a mobile device when travelling in a new area, to look up tuyến đường or to find interesting places to visit. They also greatly tạo điều kiện cho activities such as making arrangements to meet up with friends.
On balance, I feel that rather than spoiling our health or reducing enjoyment of our free time these devices actually enhance our lives.
