Luyện tập: The Relationship between Equality and Personal Achievement

In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?

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Topic statementIn my opinion, an egalitarianchủ nghĩa quần bình society is one in which everyone has the same rightsquyền lợi and the same opportunitiescơ hội. OpinionI completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.

Topic statementEducation is an important factor with regard toliên quan đến personal success in life. Supporting statementI believe that all children should have access to free schoolingsự giáo dục, dạy dỗ, and higher education should be either free or affordablecó thể chi trả for all those who chose to pursuetheo đuổi a university degree. Alternative statementIn a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better preparedchuẩn bị for the job marketthị trường lao động. Supporting statementThis kind of inequalitysự bất bình đẳng would ensuređảm bảo the success of some but harm the prospectstriển vọng, tương lai of others.

Topic statementI would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflictsự mâu thuẫn with people’s freedomsự tự do to succeed or fail. Supporting statementIn other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivationđộng lực to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. Supporting statementOn the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potentialtiềm năng, khả năng if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Supporting statementThose who did not make the same effortnỗ lực would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Supporting statementInequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivatelàm nhụt chí, không có động lực people because they would know that the oddstỷ lệ thắng of success were stackedchất đống lên in favour ofủng hộ those from privilegedcó đặc ân backgroundsgia cảnh.

OpinionIn conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.

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In my opinion, an chủ nghĩa quần bình society is one in which everyone has the same quyền lợi and the same cơ hội. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.

Education is an important factor liên quan đến personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free sự giáo dục, dạy dỗ, and higher education should be either free or có thể chi trả for all those who chose to theo đuổi a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better chuẩn bị for the thị trường lao động. This kind of sự bất bình đẳng would đảm bảo the success of some but harm the triển vọng, tương lai of others.

I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in sự mâu thuẫn with people’s sự tự do to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their động lực to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their tiềm năng, khả năng if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same nỗ lực would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to làm nhụt chí, không có động lực people because they would know that the tỷ lệ thắng of success were chất đống lên ủng hộ those from có đặc ân gia cảnh.

In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.